Wow so scary, but i had to keep reading i just couldnt walk away

I really like this one.. I think it deseres a 5/5

Very dark. One of my favorite kinds. The flow and words you used to convey the story well done and thought out.
Good job and keep writing.

I like it a lot you're good at dark writings too. Keep it up...maybe someone will recognize you by your writings.

Gave me chills down my spine, if you see my point. Impressive, really dark. Write more! XD