Luann,
I must say this was brilliant. I'm actually in tears. It amazes me how your able to give such a wonderful discription. The words alone were so deep that they touched my heart. I'm so amazed that I am a little lost for words. I have read over three hundred poems on this site, and I'm glad to say that this is truly one of the best. They say that a picture can say a thousand words and your picture says it all. Keep up your magnificent work. 5/5

Your new fan
Letty

P.S. Thanks for the lovely comments they mean a lot to me.

Luanne,
This was a tear jerker! So thought provoking, it really made me think about those horrific things that happened.
Well done, a truly brilliant poem
How are you?
Take care
Katie!
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Luanne, you always find a way to draw out the emotion and hit home with your writing. Brilliant!

Not only did you touch the heart with this write, you also touched the mind. We think, if there is a God, how could he let this happen, But did he not give us a mind to think for ourselves.

So many have suffered in this world for their beliefs, I often ask myself, when will it end. Why must we, as humans chose to hate when we could chose to love instead.

Once again, beautiful write. Heartbreaking though it was.

Jeannie

A lesson the world needs to learn. No matter what or who you are from. We all deserve a chance to thrive. 5/5
The lost will never be forgotten

Luanne you gave me the chills litterally with this piece that I was tempted more than once through reading it to turn away and find something a bit lighter. It's historical which makes your words even sadder to the point where yes even I became a bitter sadder after reading this poem which does show you do have a way of words to show this much emotion.

Luanne oh WOW! You left me speechless with this passionate write.
You have captured the horror of the time in this piece...it is a beautiful and heartfelt dedictaion.