I like this poem. The structure itself, and flow was amazing. Nicely done.

Thx again

Hmm..

The flow was excellent, yet again. Something that I can't seem to grasp. The feeling in this was much better than the Drag Race one I think. The rhymes were also unique. I like that. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Another wonderfully written poem! Great job! def 5/5

xoxo
-xxEvilAngelxx-

I just read it again and i just want to suggest taking the "ever" out of the last line--- i think that might flow better! Keep writing!

xxEvilAngelxx

Ya thanks evil...but i dont think there is a way to edit it is there?

Why the hell are you so popular on here, huh?

Cuz im loved