I think I have said that before, but let me say it again
If anyone wants to improve then they just have to follow your lead, style and also great attitude.
I really enjoyed this poem, you are so great and know how to write, know what word to chose. great job once again.another 5/5 from me.

Such a short poem that burst into a whole world of ideas,good choice of words and great imaginery.
Thought provoking as well.
You have framed a fire perfectly.

God Bless!

Brilliant! You have given the reader a perfect description of what your saying with very few words. It was straight to the point, but it was meaningful. I really admire your abilities. Keep up the excellent work. 5/5

Letty

Very nicely written poem Noni.
Works well when you've described fire so well, makes the Acrostic effect even more amazing. Good stuff :)

I really like this cause it's short and to the point but still very powerful. Beautiful wording also. 5/5
~Jules

Noni, I think in your title you meant Acrostic ....but anyways

Within 4 short lines you have created an image that leaves me breathless .

It has beauty, yet so very powerful ....
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece .

Exellent! very nice acrostic! loved the poem, a great image of fire
thanks for your comment!

shadow dancer

I loved the imagination of the fire... it was great... short but wow!!!

Very well done for an Acrostic, I have to say. A lot of them are just words put together to 'form' a poem. This one isn't. I like the descriptions again, and the choice of words was astounding. Great write. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

This is a very good poem. The way that you described fire was absolutely beautiful. Every sentence was very descriptive with great word usage. And it's like it painted a picture in my mind. Great job on this! 5/5

Short but really good. I wish I could've written something like this! hehe

[[ Poetess ]]

Wowww very short yet very effective, i like it, well done...

I LOVE ACROSTICS!! this one is beautiful.. such a short word.. i never thought you could make such a great poem from.. another ejoyable read with a wonderful flow and great word choices.. keep up the fantastic work!!

Good job on this form!