I loved the structure of the poem
And i hope things get better for you and your sister very soon
Great poem
5/5
*Gem*

Make sure your sister sees this, tell he how you feel it will mean alot to her, she is probably feeling reali alone, knowin how you feel can help, it is a reli gr8 poem and is nice to see that you care so much about your sister. keep writing.

This poem was so sad.i love it.im sorry this happened to your sister.must had been really hard.
but a good poem
5/5
best wishes