This really gets to you, I mean straight to the heart. Good job.

I love it
verry good

Well written, good rhyme scheme. good job.

O its so sad i almost started crying
very good keep it up

This poem is soo sad...ur so talented... way better than me well gtg
ok bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

mi amor para ti
abby*

OMG! It's so entirely sad! I hope this isn't true about anyone you know. This would be horrible. =( I really like this poem A LOT. It gives in perspective of how abusive marriages work, and are thought through.

The flow was a little off in places still, but it all worked out in the end with the descriptions and thoughts. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

This poem brought me to tears it was bloody amazing i loved it ihope you dont mind i showed a few girls of my msn and in college i hope thats ok i want people to this beauty i really loved it loads you guna go in me favs :) so smile xxx alex xxx