Comments : His poison

  • 17 years ago

    by ToxicSpookyAngel

    Awww cute poem

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    This is an "okay" poem... i get a little confused when ready some of the lines such as "You came around at the perfect time
    Proved me wrong,"

    you might wanna add why you were proved wrong and thats about it.. it could use a little work... i wouldve liked to read a little more about how your feeling.. maybe some stronger words ... all in all its about a 3 or 4 but i voted it a 5 anyway to boost up your rating =)

  • 15 years ago

    by jeffery sechrest

    Well written i like it 5/5