OMG that is beautiful. actuallly have me in tears. Brilliant. Keep writing. 5/5

Madddddddyyy!
This was really reallly sweet yet sad. beautiful infact. everything you write ALWAYS touches me. Im glad I found you on this site, because you are an amazing poet. keep it up love.
katt xox

Hey darl this was sad really touching. i was jsut readin ur comments on my poems about cory n it bought tears to my eyes. thanks for the comments xx

Nice poem
great flow
beautiful story
fab ending
xx