Comments : Bloody Eyes

  • 17 years ago

    by Amber Parker

    This is a really good poem. It is easy to understand the narrator's pain and helplessness, how miserable the person is. My favorite line is 'i promised i wouldnt cut again,
    but im slipping back into then.' It's catch and dark, I don't know how to explain it. Really good though ;)


  • 17 years ago

    by Phantom Lord

    I love it. I agree with ol' Scarlee. 5/5. Your talent is showing.: )

  • 16 years ago

    by Grace

    I love it!!!! =p