Beautiful. Gosh i really felt the pain of this girl, i guess life doesnt always work out and people cant always tell when you're hurting...but i'm really amazed at how well you captured all this.
stars and moons,
jess x

This was very deep. I almost felt as if I was there with that girl. Like I knew her. Great Talents.

This poem is sooooooooooo idk the word for it! but it's like a story that you just can't stop reading! This poem was great it'd make me wanna read it over again on a rainy day!