Great job once again on this poem i loved it 5/5!!

Agreed. Let it burn! Perfect... absoultly perfect.

Love Niquee

Very nice. I totally have had this sort of experience before. (Mine did NOT work.. but thats me :) )

Nice write... 5/5

-Luna
(Thanks for the nice comment :D )

Hi. I really appreciate your comment on my poem. It was very nice thank you.

Love it:) I really like the beginning
We started off as friends
But slipped slowly into more
It just kind of happened.
But us you still ignore

very good

Wow, that is great!!! you are one of my favorite poets that i've seen...keep writing, i love your work!!
xox.kayla.xox

There's things that we'll change
And things we'll need to learn
They say love is friendship on fire
So I say let it burn

I really like this stanza..It really sums up what you mean about the whole poem! I love it!
xoxo

I loved the last stanza, thats the best phrase i've ever heard!
And as always, you never cease to amaze me with the sheer uniqeness (if thats a word) of your work.
Excellent piece
5/5
*Gem*

5/5. this is another good poem by you. great write.

Gr8 job,, i loved the ending two senteces thats really good,, i like ur use of words,, gr8

Comment #6:

The last stanza is just perfect!!! I mean that phrase -They say love is friendship is love on fire, so I say let it burn-
(*sigh*) That right there is the epitome of passion. GREAT job!
~Midnight Sun