I really like this poem, its so well writen....

It has commenting and meaning. i like the sound virs 'cause it shows how serouse this is to u. it has a strong ending. i like it:)

I love it:) 99/5 thanks for the comment on mine:)

I heart it...

LUVS

katiebug

See this is what i love with your poems. You dont have just one emotion throughout. There is anger, sorrow, and a little bit of self hate. You certainly have talent.

Kelly
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