Ah cute
i can tell you really love this person
good job

Awww this is a very cute and sweet poem. wonderful job writing this. its short but it says a lot in a very little words. amazing job 5/5

Lovely, just lovely write.
Hmmm I'm sure tuncay will like this one.

God Bless!

Wow, this one is also so great....5/5

Woah great poem a very sweet and romantic one I love it Greatly penned
well done

Geneross

This is a very beautiful poem. I loved the whole perfect love portrait that you painted. You chose just the wording to make it sound so very speacial. You also put just the right amount of emotion into it. You have written an excellent poem. keep up the wonderful work. 5/5

Love
Letty

Very cute really sweet i gave it a 5/5

God Bless
=> Tay
thanks for the comments

Whoa thats a real nice poem to show that special someone you love em', goodwork! Karms...

Aw, cute.

Very sweetly written poem. Enjoyable read. Keep writing.

This is cute .
Well written, hun` .
It painted an image in my hed.
Short, but nicee .
Love it .
..ღ__MiNDYY

Tis another very good poem,
fix the i in line 3 and the grammer will be perfect,
give it a 5/5!!!
keep them coming!!!

I loved how simple it was but yet held such deep meaning. I could relate with what you were saying which made it a joy for me to read. The emotions were real and beautifully described. Well done *5/5*