Comments : My Dream

  • 17 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    "I smile as I realise
    That although we are apart,
    It is only in body
    Never in heart." I love that part great job on this poem it was great

  • 17 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Xcellent poem, well penned and truely romantic. I love how you phrase certain part of this poem....XJ

  • 16 years ago

    by brokenhearted

    BEAUTIFUL!!