Your words are so emotional. So gripping. So sad. It's heartbreaking to read about someone watching the people they love leaving, whether emotional or physical. I feel for this poem, really great.

Love Niquee

Thank you for the comment

i love this poem ... its almost as if i can actually see it happening

5/5

So emotional.
The ryhming seemed almost effortless, it all fit together so perfectly.
I love your work!
5/5
*Gem*