Comments : Heartless night

  • 18 years ago

    by Mia

    Hey that poem is really good i know what u are feeling with letting someone u really love go. it hurts more then u can explain. but yeah here are some of my ideas for ur title:

    1. whisper my last goodbye

    2. ive let you go..so my last goodbye shall follow.

    3. never relised u ment this much.

    4. My last goodbye with my broken heart.

    and yeah thats all i can think of! good luck with the name and keep up the good work with the poems!

    luv mia!

  • 18 years ago

    by Trine

    After thinking about it I let my boyfriend choose a title, seeing how the poem is about a dream I had about him...
    But thanks for the tips, I really appreciate it.
    -Trine