Hey this poem kicks ass...
i love it... i read your other poem it was ok...sadly it didn't kick ass!!!

Omg.....THATS SOOO SCARY..lol wow. you have talent

You really do have an amazing talent for writting dark poems..this is just another wonderful example of how good you are at writting them
auna

So the Jackle is like bad carma?

He'll take away our future,
by presenting our past.

We've done something horrible and by that we will pay, so death is our punishment? Cool..but I don't want to die =DD

I still love your work, this one is definatly one of my all time favorites, and not just out of your poems but out of all the poems I have read.

Very interesting and creative, with vivid imagery.
Keep up; 5/5