My gosh, the way you write, I don't think you will ever make a poem that doesn't grasp the person who read this' heart! Keep it up!

--Ally

Heh tell someone elc they lack creativity... i dont even rember what ur poem was about!! oh w8... u tellin a story on ur ex?? well yeah poems ight 4.5/4.5 ... i just dont get the feelings u have.. seems u really love her but yet u know u cant have her back?? if im right then i guess ur poem iz 5/5 but overall very well penned