This poem is realy really good. i love it shanik

I liked your choice of words and they gave lots of pictures to reader. I also liked that you took the first stanza and used that one to end the poem - good effect.

"Outside, the wind rages on; in her soul." - Nicely written.

I can't think of any critisism to give so just keep up the good work.

-Kenneth G. @ Faceless Mirror.

I adore this poem!

Trees continue their rythmic dance, writing on the wall.*

beautiful line!