Dude you kick ass... this poem is awsome... i love it.it's creepy and dark!! and yeah about the other poem i'm sorry, i didn't know it wasn't finished, but i bet it kicks ass!

This is good. I like it.

'One of seven you will pay,
a punishment chosen for each.'

Are you talking about the seven deadly sins? Or seven different punishments? I don't know, that's just what i was wondering... Anyways, this is awesome. I'd like to read more soon.

~Scarlett

Wow, kinda creepy...makes the hairs on my arms stand up... well written:)
auna

Woooooow i like it it was excellent

Uuh, I say your...the creepy man who locks people into your house and kills them ^^ Yeah, I know I just too good for those type of riddles. xDD

But nevertheless, like always, I love it!