This poem made me laugh. I quite enjoy your sense of humour. If you keep enlightening peoples lives like this, you may just get an award... or a pie, either way.
Keep 'em coming
Ash

This poem should have been posted in the humor section. I think the poem was outragiously funny, but I wouldn't consider it a poem about life. I think it was kind of cool because it made me laugh . good job. 4/5

That's so cool. Love the rhyming.

HAHAHAHAHAHA! Mark-Man. I lurrrve pie. I ate some yesterday. ;P

Gosh. We havn't talked in agessss. I've got sooo much to tell you. Wow!

Anywho. This Second Pie poem was aweswome!! Keep it uppp!

Natalie``

Haha this made me laugh. =P great poem, i don't see many good happy ones around lately, but u've managed it. =D

keep writing
xxx

Haha that was funny! my ex would've thought this quite funny as well, he always said pie... lol =]
Ciao xx

Haha awesome poem..
i wrote a poem about chocolate chip cookies.. inspired by yur poem..haha