Each ash representing a broken promise

^^I loved that line. Wowee--

Very sad poem, but very nicely written. Your vocab in this piece was quite good. Your flow was nice, as with the rhyming. & the emotions were awesome aswell. Excellent job! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Awww wow this is realllyyy good. i love the big words you used in it. and it was orginal. awesome job writing it. its sad, but amazing. keep it up your a great writter 5/5

Aww

nice

This should be under 'love' poems..
BUT..

Anyways..I simply loved this, as well. You seem to leave me speechless..utterly speechless. I loved it...You expressed a broken heart/break-up so well it baffles me..As I said before (and cannot get over) you take a cliche topic and write it in a completely different way! Which is amazing...Great job.

xDarkSuicidex5.5

This is another nice written poem!!! was very sad!!!

Good job on this one. Very sad.

Desolate hearts intertwined as one
Crushed by the infidelity of another
Broken roads that don't lead home
Walking these dampened streets alone

Loved this stanza. Flowed well. Keep it up.

Peace and Happiness
Jeannie

I like your poems r great keep writin

Amazing! sadly this is all true. u can capter the emotions of love. everone can relate to this. i lov it:)

Speechless.

Sorry, it like cut of my post thingy. Whoops anyway! Well, as I was saying I loved the first stanza, especially the first line. You have amazing talent as a writer. Great flow, wording, great everything. Keep it up! 5/5

Innoc3ntStar