I wrote a longer comment but something happened to it. Sorry about that though. It basically said that you have a talent for creating imagery to stick in the reader's minds, how I never realize there is rhyme in a poem until I reread some lines, and how you create a flow so good nobody should stumble on your words.

That was very well written. But, the first stanza was a little rocky with flow. Two of the lines were bigger than the others. But, overall, I really enjoyed reading this, it was beautiful. I loved the imagery you used. Keep it up. 5/5 =]]

-Jenna.

Very nicely written, I like the details you put in here,
Flow is great also.
a definite 5!

God Bless!

This is on the edge of dark, which I like. wonderful imagery. Kept me reading. hated to see it end.

Great job

Happiness
Jeannie

It's very unique and beautiful.

OMG Sondos!! Your skill is nothing short of sheer genius. Have you ever tried to get your work publsihed? Please do, lest humanity never gets a chance to read such work.

This is remarkable. Absolutely breathtaking.

peace and lotsa love
shobhana