Wow, I had read this one earlier and was going to comment on how super it was. But now I come back and you anded a few lines. And now its fantastic. lol. I expecially love how you find out that hes dead at the end. Yea that was cool. :) Except I have a poem call Dying with Daisys that I haven't posted yet that ends with flowers on a grave. So if you read it, just know I am not like copying you. Anyways 5/5