I love how this poem has only 2 words per line. It really emphasizes the meaning behind the words. It's funny how saying so little is saying so much. I really like it!! Great job! =)

Very good poem, i know how it feels to be rejected like that, conveyed very well, with the layout adding more power to the words. congratulations.

Thats what u call one sided love. U described it perfectly. 5/5.

Its amazing how one may right so passionately and depict with such absolute perfection the feeling of rejection, when one has never expierenced it themselves. but you sealed the deal girl. 5/5