Good Job. Says a lot,but doesn't quite drive it home. 4/5. :)

I see that you've put passion into this poem from everyday life experience. That's good, it means your poetry comes from something other than a need for attention... sadly that's what a lot of it is on this site. Nice rythm and rhyme and i hope to see more like this in the future.

I understand perfectly and how u feel, if u been through it then u would understand. great poem shows the pain and the real life in it not just fake.

keep on writing poems (Y)