Oh, u muz really feel hurt when u wrote this poem, well, gud one..

Very sad poem. Thank you for the comment on my poem. I have a bunch of father poems, directed towards different kinds of dads. But this was a truly heartfelt piece and you could sense that.
Charisma*

I can really relate to this poem because I too have issues with my father. This poem is excellent and very realistic. My favorite of yours.

~jas~

Wow...Great. Just great. Great depth and emotion. My father has problems to. I wanna know what has happened to families !?!?! 5/5

~Shae

Aww.. this is soo sad and i can relate.. the emotion is wonderful in this poem and the flow is flawless.. really great job!

So many children go through this, parents who are there but never really take the time to notice. They live in the same house but might as well be 1000 miles away - great write 5/5