Lol...this was a real cute twist on an old tale. That was good! Keep it up!
~Jules

LMAO.. This was so funny, You beat me to this title in the contest lol so I had to settle for 2nd best :P Very well written and very amusing well done 5/5 xx

PS good luck for the comp :]

|Lol i love it 5 for you

Mmm... nice rhyming and flow. The cadence was wonderful, and it was such a neat little twist on an old fairytale. Very well done, another nicely penned work. Thank you for your kind comments. Very much appreciated.

Kind Regards,
Luna

That was fab
I never saw the ending coming in that way.
It had a lot of giggles
5/5
*Gem*

LOL That was so funny. Very good job! Jpoet*

HAHAHA! That was so cute. I loved it.

5/5

-Jenna.