I love you caitlin( as a brother)

Caitlin this was a great poem. you did a very nice job at keeping the ryming good. ^^ you are very talented and Ive read some of you work its actually really good. (not to mean that badly), if you keep writting youll get far. keep on writin'- Meg oh if youd read some of my poetry and tell me what you think Id appreciate it, I thrieve on the comments I recive to keep me motivated. :)

I love your rhyming is clean cut and positioned so well great work xox sam