Awwww Sarah i love this poem, so sad but beautifuly written. I would say my favorite part but i would have to copie and paste the intire poem on this comment =] 5/5

I loved this poem it flowed nicely.. beautifully written. 5/5

~[AnotherDream]~

Wow another excellent write.. I'm exactly the same lol..

'I hold my tears back
My problems I hide inside
If I say nothing's wrong
then I have lied

My scars aren't shown
My heartache stays with me
If I am upset
This You will not see'

My fave 2 stanzas.. well done 5/5 xx

I really like the last stanza of that poem. its kind of like you are telling anyone that who reads it that you write poems to keep your sanity.