Comments : Abandoned?

  • 17 years ago

    by Vonnie McHugh

    Great!

  • 17 years ago

    by emmerz

    Awww this was awesome girlie! you definitely do have a gift of writing, and im sure the music that goes along with this (if there is any) is absolutely fantastic. i really liked the flow and the rhyming to this, you did a fantastic job!
    5/5 for sure

    --emilyy

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    This is a great poem - really full of hope and faith!