I Really Like this Poem, You did awsome work

Very dark and very good

I like this one. good job

You do great work. Powerfully done with great word usage.

Wow, i was practically CRYING at the end of this one. I guess thats what a good poet can do. You know, get the point to the reader. so, way good job.

That was...
i dont know what to say.
there was so much feeling and emotion in this poem!

I had gossbumps!! Soo good! Very touching. . =]]

Wow soo powerfull :)) really loved reading it :)) i was disapointed that it ended soo soon :( i want more!!! lol

Cool poem :)