CONGRATULATIONS.. on breaking the writers block.. took me forever too! Well done, and you sure as hell broke it!

"When I am reminiscing about the good old days
When we used to unwind smoking big fat J's"

Those lines made me laugh haha.. sounds like a good time to me.. I really understood the meaning of this poem and I could relate to it..

A million times better than

I luv u chantelle
swear u dnt smell
we r frends
til da end

Great friendship poem, very refreshing to see!
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Dude Laura...I am just in love with your friendship poems seriously...your rhymes are always different from the usuals we read here on pnq which is why its always refreshing to read your work! AHh I just looked up and saw katie just said that!

ANyways Love..great to have you writing again its a bonus for me to read some amazing work from you after a long hard day at school! MWah
Love ya Laur, this was awesome!
Chels

Dang!!! Girl, I must say you took
me back thru my childhood buddys
and remembered my best friend Kelly,
whom I have known since grade school
and has been my flying partner since
we were in the fifth grade. We have not
been out to the flying field in about two
years now and thanks to you its time for
that phone call. Thank you for sharing
this heartwarming read and Write On,
Bogie

This poem is really wicked. Good Job Dude.

I love the idea and i can feel the emotion. but some of the rhyming seems forced. but i think candamerie, me. also the flow is sort of awkward because some lines are much longer or shorter that the ones around it to account for the rhyme. but nice job! i definetly enjoyed it.