Great job!

AWESOME!!! KEEP IT UP!!!

Oh my gosh, i love it. This applies to the way i feel if you read "Is she the One" but i would love to have half of the talent that you obviously have.

Aww this poem is soo sweet i love it!
my favorite lines are
"but everytime im in his arms
i start to think of you"

and

"i hope one day i can tell you
the secret that i hide
but i would wait forever
just to make you mine "

the beginning was clear, the middle was full of emotion, and in the end, you wrapped everything up nicely! great work.if the girl in this poem is you, i hope things work out for you and the guy in the poem. lots of love, kayla