Wow what a sad ending. This was a very nice poem and I enjoyed it.
Dreaming of magical places
Loved that line...it just touches the dreamer in me! Jpoet*

Holy.. i did not see that coming. this is so good. i love it.
dee

Awww
*tear*
so sad brad
It was a very unpredictable and captive poem.

keep writin'
~Emma