Great poem. Excellent descriptions. Wonderful rhyming and flow.

Great use of vocab of course lol. Great descriptions. You may want to relate it to the title more.
Keep it up

"Yelping out to tree branches surrounding,"
this line pretty said so much along with the good choice of words and flow.
5/5 for sure.

God Bless!

I really like this poem it's really good. nice work shanik

This is really good, NatterPatter.

i love you, i love you, i love you, i love you. remember that, okey?

*huggles tight*

keep your head up, booger. stay strong!

i love you so much. and you deserve the best. you deserve to be happy.

Awh, wow Taleee.. You continue to amaze me with every poem I read of yours.. I liked the descriptions and emotion you put into this one.. I could understand it at least =P Nicely done! 5/5

Hmm, your poetic description of very good Nat, but you are still missing the flow. It just seems like you describe objects with adjectives that seem obscure. I think there is an essence missing in your poetry. I'm kind of saying, it's choppy, but as an intellectual poem, it's quite good. I guess, what I'm saying is, no true emotions flow through these poems. Lol, sorry Nat, I guess I miss those poems where you use to rant about things, and your sentences seem simple rather than abstract. Hehe, it's only me. I still love your poems SMAWCE sister, and I still think you are an amazing poet!