Omfg! Lmao, i didn't acutally find thsi that funny, but the enthusiasm you put into it was hillarious.. Lol, nice use of creativity though! =P 5/5

Hahahaha...
This one made me laugh

especially this part:

"I have traveled beyond the stairs."

That was piss funny!!!

I just giggled all the way through it. It was so random and the stanza that had the last line, "Hahahahahaha" just cracked me up!

Well done!
5/5
*Gem*

Omgosh....that was freaking hilarious.....you have a cool sense of humor.....im not really a funny poem writer cuz mine are more depressed, coming from my real life so yeah....keep writing!

This wasn't really all that funny but the way you worded everything made it hillarious....it was so cute

Hey i liked you poem alot anyhow i wrote something similer i ways wondering if you minded if i posted it because it was your ideal well comment me back or email me at sadaamkiller@hotmail.com

That's really cute..