It drew me in at the beginning… but what I got to

--Turn
Around and look at me
Do you see me tremble in the dark
And with the haunting of love remembered
Can you not feel a spark.—

the – Do you see me tremble in the dark—threw me off….

And - - But he left me standing here
Without a second glance. - -

You used “you” all the way through.. but then put he in it.. so that threw me off to…
Other then that awesome :) I really liked it

I really loved this poem! it was just WONDERFUL!!!! so congrats and thanks for participating!