I liked it, flowed well! Thanks for the comment! Good job, keep it up 5/5

Aww such a sweet poem and so sad. Well written 5/5

~dezi

"Now i ask, will we ever be?
Or just a love story gone wrong."

Just beautiful.
I loved the repitition at the ending. It was so bittersweet.
I loved every line of this poem.
Brilliant
5/5
*Gem*