Comments : Snow. {Lantern.}

  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    So, do you just sit and explore every style of poetry and say. Okay, I'll write one of those.

    Thsi was very well done. I have such a hard time expressing myself in so few words.

    Great job.

    Happiness
    Jeannie

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Great poem keep writing and ill keep reading. xxx so strong and so believable i was captured in the moment and got carried away reading it. That must have meant something :)

    please could you comment on some of my poems much appreciated xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    I didnt know these types of poems existed i dont know much about the different types of poetry i just stick to basics i think maybe il try one some day xxx alexxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by catherine

    I think the 4th line has 5 syllabales, not 4?

  • 17 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    :) painted a picture in my mind darling

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    I thought it was great but i agree with catherine, this line has got 5 syllables. but great writing, 5/5

    Autumn colored leaves