I like this poem it has good flow. shanik

The poem was AMAZING!!!! Your comments mean a lot to me. Keep writing... you are SOOOOOO talented

YOYOYO,shriya banerji i love this poem alot i admire it becasue it show what your mind actaully thinks this could make a real legend LOL.
Exellent discription and great way of rythmes i hope you have more exiting poem exactually like this but even better.
Keep trying to make more adventure poems. My god,lol, you really know you texture of poems you write.
Shriya i love your poems so much the mean alot to me mainly beacsue your my bestfriend and i hope you will always remember me,next time you want me to read your poems dont comment mine and tell me CALL ME!!!
xoxroxyxox aka your dearest frined emilyyy pukasssss lol!!