Ei..,nice poem you have here..i can really put myself into it..keep up the gud work...love lotz

Very gud baby gurl keep up da gud work ur poems r great

Wow, you could feel the intensity of the poem. I like the last stanza a lot. Good job! Jpoet*

The style of this poem was very unique and i loved how u worded things. it was very well written! 5/5

Wow this poem is really well written and that last stanza was really really good =)
i shall be reading more of your poems =)

*~*Jen*~*

Absolutely fabulous, like the way you've done it too. U go Girl!!

That is like exactly me and my ex...xcept the last lines...i dont want him to forget me! lol

You'r good!!..wow..dis is soo wat i want to ask dat bastard!!..lolZ

Omg u have great talent luv yasss biee

Really good poem. It shows devotion and wanting- whether or not that's how you feel, it was done well.

Another poem I totally fell in love with! I can sooooo relate!! It brings back memories... you rock.. \m/

Wat?

Forget her,
why do I even ask?
Forget me,
It's not like we're gonna last.

i thought he was her's not yours..??..

still was guud@ ..luved it *LUV*