I can relate!! Great poem keep up the good work.

That is an amazing poem the rythem was great and i can relate to what it was saying. i know how it feels to love someone and know that they'll never really care.keep writing

Don't i know how that feels.
Brilliant poem hun
5/5
*Gem*

Gr8 ending. i since a little of regret in the poem. lov is sad. got a good flow. good job:)

Very deep and I could feel your hurt and to be honest I once felt that to but never had the words and now you said it all........

5/5 !!!!!!!!!

Omg!! I'm touched by this poem, iT's everything i thoughit would be.It's a great poem so much emotion and enrgy had been put into this poem
xoxroxyxox

Well written.....defiantely speaks to me....i kno that feelin!! 5/5!! keep it up

Great poem, alot of emotion was put into it. Good job, 5/5 keep it up

That was a great poem..it brings back the emotions i used to have when i was going through the same thing..so its sad but the way you put it makes it a perfect descriptoin of emotion, so good job.:)

Man, that was GREAT.

AWSOME, sad, but it was really good, it flowed really well...have u ever taken writing class?

I LOVE this poem!!!

This is great. one of the best iv read for a while.

I liked this poem, its so true.
~Kyra~

Very good at expressing your emotions. 5/5

Thats very sad i know that feeling to good job u made everyone feel your words

Hey very nice, I've been in the same place at one point in time. But eventually you realize that loving him isn't worth it. lol, took me a while. Keep writing...its great stuff.

Love is the most beautifull, most uplifitng most amazing feeling a human being can ever hope to expierence but on the same note it is the most painfull :(( soo true i loved this poem soo much :))

I liked the poem. I read a lot of phrases and things I've heard in songs though so it didnt feel as originial to me as it would've without me picking those up, but I liked the rhyming. 4/5

I SOOOO know how you feel and i realized that with an ex-boyfriend and promised to myself that if any guy i was ever in love with even came close to cheating on me then he doesn't love me back so forget guys like that even though its hard...but great poem i voted a five!

Beautiful poem amazingly written you have awesome talent
oxox jane