Comments : Kiss Me With Your Bullets

  • 17 years ago

    by ForeverYoung

    Wow! such a powerful poem, well done!
    You Rhyming is amazing and it flowed beautifuly!

    So kiss me with your bullets
    Caress me with those bombs
    Killing isn't my style
    And breathing takes too long

    ^^
    I really like this stanza its very powerful, great title too.

    10/5 if i could!

    ~Murder.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Oh wow another excellent poem from you! you are really good. this was just wonderful. it had so much emotion in it and i loved the rhymes. i really like what you were writing about!
    keep writing! i'm adding you to my favorites, so i hope to see more from you veryy soon =].
    5/5!

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Batman

    OMGosh. That was pretty Ah-mazing. I dont like war as well. I think its worthless.