Comments : Future

  • 17 years ago

    by claire

    Awww thats really nice well done hun xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    My family always tries sway my decisions,
    They only think about what they want me to do,
    At times I feel,
    I am the only person I can listen to,

    In the end, you are the only one who can make decisions for yourself, because you will be the one living your life with the choices that you make. You just have to do what you feel is right and makes you happy. I guess we can only prepare ourselves for what the future holds, and try to embrace it. Great poem!

    Take Care.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    A wonderful way of writing such a meaningful topic! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Courtney

    I know how you feel!

    The rhyming pattern you took is one that I haven't seen much of, but you did well :)

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Wow, i can realte so much,sorry you feel like this,it will get better