Omg! i love this poem. it touched my heart. thats exactly what i'm goin through. please keep up the good work!

Hey, what you wrote is v.deep.. if this really happens to you i admire you for being able to get it out..it has so much feeling in it even tho when ppl read it they are only feeling a quarter of the pain your going through..
just think to yourself even if you are scared of what people around you think.. noone can help you feel better unless they know what it is thats getting you down.. maybe try let the people around you in on some 'real' emotion.. i know its easier being said than done.. trust me i need to take some of my own advise.. lol
I think you've written a great poem!
Take care..