Great poem keep writing and ill keep reading. xxx so strong and so believable i was captured in the moment and got carried away reading it. That must have ment something :)

please could you comment on some of my poems much appreciated xxx alex xxx

This peice is amazingly written, you're description and vocab are brilliant really clearly expressing the content. well written

Great, it just flows great and paints a great mental picture

Great poem! It is very unique and I definately enjoyed reading it---Every aspect of it's perfect except the flow was a little off here:

"Kings of their homeland, Fierce and cruel,
Over their homeland, predators rule."
It caught me off guard with 'homeland' used in both lines...

5/5 keep it up!

It was a different style of topic.
But you penned it very well.
I loved it.
5/5
Lovce you. xx
-Heater