I was like...well this was happier than the other poems until I read the ending. Sad, and you did a good job expressing it. Jpoet*

I really liked this poem and it was really sweet but i think you could have done with out the last stanza. this poem is a feel good poem and that last little twist isnt a happy one. its a mix of emotions that doesnt feel good. great poem though, formatically speaking. 5/5

I like this poem its good when you have time go check out my poem and see if they are good hope you like them

Awwww i can sooooo relate 2 that i swear omg that poem wat it says 2 me is that we all at sumtime have to face reality even in a dream! luv yazz bie

Awww...very sweet writing...i enjoyed reading your poem...keep up the good work...:D