Ah..such magnificent arrays of thought provoking words in lovely knitted lines of a poem.
A 5/5 for sure and deserving.

God Bless!

Oh goodness. You know how to write a sonnet. I love sonnets and this may have just made me love them more. Keep it up. =] 5/5

-Jenna.

Whaha! way to write a sonnet!
as usual, great rhythm, and (even better) great significance in the words you used!

I wanted to give some great advice,but I truly think it is absolutely beautiful just the way it is .I loved it.