Comments : Problems solved by Telephone

  • 17 years ago

    by ForeverYoung

    Wow! great work!
    I love the last line
    'This life isn't for the weak'
    Great finish!

    ~Murder

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Yet again, creative work. I enjoyed this one aswell. I personally am afraid of the phone. Haha. Anyway. Good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Not you, not no one else.
    ((Anyone))

    You remind me of how I wrote... Tip: Use more description. It really helps the poem out. But, it is only a suggestion. Take care. And nicely written, your third best.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex5.5